Question

Can anyone peer edit my Intro for my essay..?

Answer 1

Maids were amongst the likes of slaves in the 1950’s. Racial tensions were high and discrimination was fluttering. This is depicted in the novel The Help by Kathryn Stockett. Stockett describes the lives of African Americans and the women’s roles during the 1950’s and 1960’s. There were many racist acts toward African Americans epically towards Minny and Abualen two black women working as maids in the novel.
During the 1950's and 1960's African Americans never seem to be equal along with the white society due to the color of their skin and there different personalities. Blacks have been discriminated against for generations and separated from whites by law. Segregation has oppressed blacks for years. For example there are different public bathrooms for colored and for whites. There are water fountains for black and black only schools. There are many laws prohibiting blacks from doing things like sitting in front of the bus. African Americans are threatened by groups if they don't follow the law or rules. In the book The Help by Kathryn Stockett, she shows how racism and discrimination destroys the chance of the American dream for African American.

Answer 2

You should ask that in Writing. :)

Answer 3

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Answer 4

Maybe wait?

Answer 5

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