Whats a good lead in for this? "The passage of the Fourteenth Amendment and Fifteenth Amendment made African Americans citizens and recognized that black men had the right to vote, but a backlash from white Southerners, who worked diligently to intimidate blacks with threats of violence and undermine any legal gains blacks made during this period"(African Americans in U.S. history).
Hey!!!
What do you need help with?
hey i need a lead in
Ok. What do you mean?
and im in the 11th grade junior
Cool I'm in 9th!!!
kool :)
a lead is in the readers understanding of what the CD is
didnt mean to put "in"
kk. Let me take a look.
The Fifteenth Amendment and the Fourteenth Amedment had African Americans and realized the black men should have the right to vote.They also threatened African Americans through violence and legal actions. Does that help? Did I help you?
ummm thats what my CD is saying what i need is different. its like this. polar bears are dieing in the polar region becuase of global warmings doing. Then ur CD has to be talking about polar bears dieing and the amout that have died since its started and what global warming is doing to the ice there.
Oh!!!!
While I help you with yours could you help me with mine?
its hard to explain it lol but ya thats what i need :)
whats urs
Look underneath your post.:)
are you taking ap english?
no why?
just asking because what your are doing looks like something i would do in an Ap english class
haha AP's hell then :)
hey how do i reply to your message im still kinda new to this thing
hahahaha not really
well ur clearly more advanced then me at writeing so thats possibly why its easy for you ;)
hahahaha not really my writing sucks though
can you help me on a few questions?
sure u scratch my back i scratch urs :) lol
Identify the appositives or complete appositive phrases. My mother, Mrs. Gordon, and my aunt, Mrs. Teasdale, will be attending the symphony this evening. First appositive: my mother,Mrs.Gordon,or and my aunt?? (idk which one it is) Second appositive:and my aunt,Mrs.Teasdale,will be,or will be there?? (again idk which one it is)
first one is complete
idk about the second one? that one doesnt even make since... lol?
wait what?? What do u mean complete?
the first appositive make since. My mother,and my aunt,Mrs. Teasdale, will be attending the symphny this evening.
hahahahaha i have to pick only one for each.
makes*
pick the first lol
i mean the first and second each have their own answers i have to pick one of the options .... u get it?
is there an option of what the asnwer could be??
First appositive: my mother, Mrs.Gordon, or and my aunt?? Second appositive: and my aunt, Mrs.Teasdale, will be, or will be there??
my mother, Mrs, Gordon, Will be,
ok thank you :)
Thats it?! lol thats AP eglish!?
hahahahahaha yea
K AP help me out :) is this a good lead in?
Allowing the black communities to vote for what they like was a improvement in the lives of all African Americans. The passage of the Fourteenth Amendment and Fifteenth Amendment made African Americans citizens and recognized that black men had the right to vote, but a backlash from white Southerners, who worked diligently to intimidate blacks with threats of violence and undermine any legal gains blacks made during this period"(African Americans in U.S. history).
"The passage...
what do u mean by lead in? To start a para.?
transition to the CD
what is cd? LOL
credibility?
what grade r u in?
11th
concret detail
do u write essays lol?
ohhh ok
do u know what im asking for now haha?
hahahah yea i do
k so what do u think of mine does it go with my CD?
yea that works for CD because its a quote from a source
k thx just want to make sure my trasition to my CD makes since
yea it makes sense to me
i didnt go to practice becuase i had to edit my stupid paragraph and start my second one today.. :P
oh yea what sport do u play? is it an essay?
i play rugby and ya it is its a junior paper which is said to be a difficult paper to write
rugby cool! I heard of that sport but never seen it live
What is your essay on?
hardest sport in the world and makes football look like childs play haha
have you read a book called The Help by Kathryn Stockett? theres a movie on it to
i havent read the book but i saw the movie
hahahaha football already looks hard to play i really can't imagine how worse that sport is
im doing an essay on it..haha its football with out pads and its non stop runing. haha when i say non stop its mean that u feet do not top moving...(I died first pratice) lol
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