Question

Is this a sexy 3rd topic sentence paragraph?
In the 1950's and throughout the the 1960 the modern Civil Rights Moment was a time period where social activism aimed at achieving social economic and political equality for African Americans.

Answer 1

1960's

Answer 2

I'm having a hard time reading it, it don't really flow. Maybe some punctuation?

Answer 3

The civil rights movement was a time period? I thought it was a group engaging in civil disobedience to change a society.

Answer 4

Your right let me give it some agustments.

Answer 5

I thought i mentioned that by saying "where social activism aimed at achieving social economic and political equality for African Americans."

Answer 6

how about this drepeppergal
In the 1950's and throughout the 1960's the modern Civil Rights Moment was a time period where social activism aimed at achieving social economic political equality for African Americans.
can u edit it?

Answer 7

i like it! I really can think of another way to write it

Answer 8

Thank you at least someone appreciates my work! ;) haha I'm about to do a lead in tell me what you think :)

Answer 9

ok

Answer 10

I would put "was" in between activism and aimed.

Answer 11

I would also put an "a" in between achieving and social.

And is that "moment" or "movement"?

Answer 12

Btw I love the movie The Help.

Answer 13

In the 1950's and throughout the 1960's the modern Civil Rights Movement was a time period where social activism aimed at achieving a social economic political equality for African Americans. Aggressive nonviolent bus boycott is a demonstration of the power the community organized by the role of people playing in the fighting for freedom that was sparked by a famous African American Rosa Parks. "Rosa Parks's refusal to give up her seat for a white passenger, the bus boycott engaged all of Montgomery's African American community in a nonviolent, mass protest of Jim Crow segregation that spanned 381 days, financially crippling the Montgomery City Lines." Rosa Parks sometimes called the mother of Civil Rights Movement was a great African American because of her bravery for not allowing a white man to take her set.

There and ya it movement haha how about now any fixing?..

Answer 14

it was to sad

Answer 15

looks good to me. U R right it was sad.

Answer 16

R U from the south?

Answer 17

im from cali san diego and thx :)