Question

Would you please edit my writing

Answer 1

Which writing?

Answer 2

Hello,
I’m writing to ask kindly if only you have a time to take apart in my assignment. It’s about interviewing native speakers about thire jobs and habbies and I’m intrested to konw better about yours. Upon your approva,l I’ll send you questions frist that I would like you to answer it, then I’ll come to see you to go quickly through it. Don’t worry I have to write your answers with my own words.

Answer 3

Hello,
I am writing to request if you can donate some of your precious time to take part in my assignment.It is an interview with native speakers about their jobs and hobbies. Upon your approval I will send you questions that i would like you to answer, once completed I shall come to go through them with you.

For the last sentence what will they be worrying about?

Answer 4

Great, but I want to replace donate with other word, what do you think?

Answer 5

worrying about?
easy way to do home work

Answer 6

no problem its your letter, you could put give or contribute

Answer 7

Thanks man

Answer 8

No problem, if you need any more help just @SchoolSlacker me :P

Answer 9

I will

Answer 10

isn't an exaggeration to say precious time
I'm seeking simple and effect language

Answer 11

well you want to let the reader know that it is well appreciated if they help and you care for their time and are not wasting it with your assignment

Answer 12

Thanks indeed

Answer 13

No problem

Answer 14

how about tight time instead of precious time?

Answer 15

As i said it is your letter, but as i also said you want to be telling the reader that their time is valued

Answer 16

I see, but I prefer tight time

Thank you

Answer 17

Okayy you can put tight time or time