can someone help me out with this?
Create a first-person narrator (the main character tells the story using "I") and imagine a vivid scene for him or her. Imagine all of the senses involved in your scene---sight, hearing, smell, taste, and touch. Use your narrator's reaction to the atmosphere to help your reader experience it. Write vivid descriptions using strong nouns and verbs as well as adjectives. A well-chosen metaphor, simile, allusion, or personification can capture the feeling of a place. Sometimes describing what isn't visible is the best way to create atmosphere. Is there a hidden aspect to the place you've invented that your reader should know about?
Here are a few scenes that could be described in a vivid way: ~ Riding on a subway train. ~ Standing in line for a roller coaster. ~ Eating dinner at Applebee's. Good luck!
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