Question

In the book The Help a white woman named Hilly Holbrook tries passing a law allowing every white home in Jackson Mississippi to have an extra bathroom for the colored men and women working in them.

For my 2nd topic sentence. I need a outcome?

Answer 1

by this doing she is creating a bigger gap between the African American workers. ?

Answer 2

Yes, to your question in the comments.

Answer 3

is that a good commentary tho? what would u say?

Answer 4

From my perspective, with my knowledge on the topic, I say its satisfactory. I don't know any way you could improve it.

Answer 5

In the book The Help a white woman named Hilly Holbrook tries passing a law allowing every white home in Jackson Mississippi to have an extra bathroom for the colored men and women working in them. by this doing she is creating a bigger gap between the African American workers.

that is good haha?

Answer 6

Why not? I see no problem there. "a bigger gap between the African American workers."- Maybe suggest that its a bigger gap between the races...

Answer 7

ya

Answer 8

can u help me more?

Answer 9

"a bigger gap between the African American workers and the white people."

Answer 10

no i mean with somthing else haha im just correct my rough draft

Answer 11

No, sorry. I'm a bit busy.

Answer 12

what sounds better:

Answer 13

In the 1950's and throughout the 1960's the modern Civil Rights Movement was a time period where social activism aimed at achieving a social economic political equality for African Americans.
or
In 'The Help" Afircan Americans faced massive amouts of discrimination while in the pursuit of the American dream.

Answer 14

Sorry, but I can't help you there. I don't have enough information on hand about your topic. I'm just working off whats more aesthetically appealing.

Answer 15

oh ok hm how about this haha
Kathryn Stockett was a brave woman to take on the pressure of making people see both sides of the ______ in her book. Society is now out of a time where prejudice is obvious. It lurks silently until it strikes the world with horror. Courageous authors like Stockett now come a dime a dozen and barely speak up for the indiscretion of racial tension. It will take more than just "The Help" of a novel to end the haunting of discrimination.

Answer 16

Looks good. Don't know what ______ is, but I'd go with it.

Answer 17

what can i say right there haha?? race?

Answer 18

I don't really mind. Keep up the good work. IT seems to flow nicely.

Answer 19

oh ok thx haha :)

Answer 20

one more question

Answer 21

what do u think my to topics are? if u had to guess