. Impact of saturated fats and low nutrient foods has caused an obesity epidemic in schools, therefore with funding from the Department of Agriculture and other grants, implementing a Farm to School Program can aid in the fight to reclaim the healthy lives of future generations.
Thesis statment(does it need revising?)Got great feedback any more comments before I close?

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nottim · Answer

You got your topic: Whether or not Health Programs are necessary, and you got your argument.
IF I can argue your thesis, and if your thesis has a topic, its good to go.

anonymous · Answer

? I'm not sure I understand. My topic would be implementing farm to school programs in every school. So all my research would be on what was in lunchrooms before, the effects of those foods and why farm to school is better.

nottim · Answer

Well, i thought yur asking about your thesis specifically

anonymous · Answer

yes I was, i'm confusing you already, as I am confused myself. :(

nottim · Answer

Ok. You got a topic. good.
your thesis is your arguement; if i can also take an opposing argument, than it is a thesis. if i cannot argue it, it is not a thesis.

anonymous · Answer

should I shortly state my opposing argument in my thesis or does it not have to be in there?

nottim · Answer

nahh.

nottim · Answer

wait...you do have to state your 3 points (arguments for YOUR thesis) which support your thesis.

nottim · Answer

dependent on what type of essay it is.

nottim · Answer

you good?