Question

can someone proofread/edit my paper, please?

Answer 1

Oh, right, this is the "linsanity" piece. Have you worked with it since the last review?

I have to get back to work. If you're pressed for time, try jagatuba. See if he's around. Hmmm, I see that Laura* is on. You might also try her. Otherwise, I can take a look later.

Maybe explain the assignment again here, for whoever does look at it. That's always helpful.

Answer 2

It is very good

Answer 3

Okay well I helped you with the first paragraph and you have a lot more correcting to do. In the rest of the paragraphs… if you want me to correct the whole thing I can do tht for you but you’ll have to wait till tomorrow to get it….becuz this story needs a lot of corrections lol ;)

Answer 4

okay so i'll give it to you tomorrow okay? ;)...nd ur welcum

Answer 5

Here the rest was pretty fine but i masde some more changes:

Answer 6

u did a pretty good job ;)

Answer 7

np ;)

Answer 8

I read a little bit of it yesterday but b4 tht no..y?

Answer 9

well i kind of understood it when i read it yesterday

Answer 10

no but imma genius lol ;)