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could someone help me alter this sentence?
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"till human voices wake us, and then we drown" im looking for another sentence that can convey the same massege?
When human voices bring us to consciousness, we drown. This is the best i can do without context. If it is part of a poem, I would need the preceding few lines and subsequent few lines to get a proper idea.
no im just writing a short story :D wanted something similiar to the line, thankyouu!
Oh ok! anytime :)
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