Question

could someone help me alter this sentence?

Answer 1

"till human voices wake us, and then we drown"
im looking for another sentence that can convey the same massege?

Answer 2

When human voices bring us to consciousness, we drown.

This is the best i can do without context. If it is part of a poem, I would need the preceding few lines and subsequent few lines to get a proper idea.

Answer 3

no im just writing a short story :D wanted something similiar to the line, thankyouu!

Answer 4

Oh ok! anytime :)