Question

I reallly really need to edit this draft immediately.
Thank you so much!

Answer 1

Hi Cacaca,

Overall your paper looks pretty good. Is it supposed to be written in first-person?

Here are a few thoughts:

-Use consistent font type and size (check page 2)
- Use consistent spacing (check pages 2-5)
- Run Spellchecker - I see one or two typos
- Be sure not to use too many commas in one sentence. (Ex: "Naturally, exposed to this environment, I, too, had an insatiable appetite to aquire as much as I could." (p.1)
- Bold your title, add page numbers, remove extra spaces at the top of the first page

Hope this helps