Question

need someone to proofread/edit my paper, please?

Answer 1

here is ur paper that i fix :)

Answer 2

they make the claim. They make the claim (do you not repeat delete this part) that is repeating

Answer 3

yes the dark red only

Answer 4

not the bright red

Answer 5

yes you can say that

Answer 6

I have supplied my comments at the bottom of the file in orange. Those will explain how I corrected the paper, as well as, my comments on the paper as a whole.