Is this a good drabble? (Short story of 100 words)

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lifeisadangerousgame · Answer

“Hurry Chase, we need to go!” I whispered.

“Alwight, almwost done.” He whispered back.

I anxiously waited for my four year old brother to get his stuff, nervously listening for any sounds so we wouldn’t get caught.

“Alwight Vicky, awl done.”

I motioned him to follow me and grabbed our stuff. 

I silently walked to the door and reached for the doorknob, but then, it turned!  I turned and quickly shoved Chase under my bed. A horrified gasp caught in my throat as I stared into the cold angry eyes of my tormenter.

“Thought you could escape eh?” He said.

anonymous · Answer

i think thats really good, lol caught my attention :)

lifeisadangerousgame · Answer

Thanks!

lifeisadangerousgame · Answer

sure