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OpenStudy (allison):

how do i develope a strong thesis on obseity

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Depends on what you're going to talk about in the paper. The thesis is a sentence or two that is the basis for what you are going to talk about. For example if your thesis was “Using computers in a fourth-grade class promises to improve the mathematical reasoning of all students" The rest of the paper is then focused on proving / expanding upon this thought. How, Where, Why, When, etc. So we can't help you come up with a thesis without knowing what you're talking about. Obesity is such a broad topic.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thesis(opinion) Statement = the issue + point of view To have a proper and strong thesis statement, you must have both the issue your writing about and what you think about the issue,

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Pick some aspect of obesity where you can make at least two strong arguments: "Obesity is caused by the personal microbiome... due to a culture that promotes sedentary activity over movement... or due to availability of fast food rather than supermarkets (ie food desert), etc... What aspect of the topic are you interested in?

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