Which thesis statement is better?
1) Even if there are Special Education centers in the Philippines, the lack of budget allocation signifies the government's lack of regard for students with special learning needs and it results to partnerships with private sectors.
2) Compared to other Asian and Western countries, the Philippine government shows disregard for special education by allocating a very small portion of the education budget to support students with special learning needs.

Question

Which thesis statement is better?
1) Even if there are Special Education centers in the Philippines, the lack of budget allocation signifies the government's lack of regard for students with special learning needs and it results to partnerships with private sectors.
2) Compared to other Asian and Western countries, the Philippine government shows disregard for special education by allocating a very small portion of the education budget to support students with special learning needs.

anonymous · Answer

I think the first one is more substantial.