Can someone please proofread/edit my book review/my opinion over the author proposals, essay. It has to be at least 2,500 words.

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anonymous · Answer

the first sentence doesn't make since at all...i dnt even know wat u r trying to say

anonymous · Answer

okay well i got some help nd I got it worked out.

anonymous · Answer

np

anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

I have edited the first paragraph. Before I go any further into the essay, you need to read over it yourself and make corrections. It is very hard to follow what you are trying to say. 

I know that once you start writing you just want to get it all down on paper. However, you must go over what you have written and make your own corrections. This will allow you to build off of your mistakes and others will be able to help you more effectively. Right now, I feel as if I am rewriting your whole paper.

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