Question

Can someone please proofread/edit my book review/my opinion over the author proposals, essay. It has to be at least 2,500 words.

Answer 1

Well it's got enough words :) I think it's pretty good *thumbs up*

Answer 2

Here are some tips:
-Use the same tense. I'm assuming that the correct tense is present tense.
-Some setences do not make sense. This is called a "diction" error. Read your essay aloud to see these mistakes.
-use less first person.
-shorten the paragraph lengths. By doing this, the paper can target one topic at a time, instead of switching topics constantly.
-More in-text citations. Every time you make a reference to Sabto, the paper needs an in-text citation. If its medium is print, the paper needs a page number per in-text citation.
I'm not sure if the paper requires MLA or APA.