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OpenStudy (anonymous):

what would be a good transition sentence to put in between these sentences. In recent years the concer for the enviroment's health has been put at the bottom of everyone's list. {transition} There are many cause to the increase in global warming, that being said, the main concern is it needs to be fixed.

OpenStudy (trautlein):

I would first rewrite both of the sentences, they are a bit awkward. What you are writing sounds pretty informal, e.g. "at the bottom of everyone's list" and "that being said" don't sound that formal.

OpenStudy (theresa.womack):

In recent years, the concern for the environment's health have been put on the bottom of everyone's list even though there are many causes to the increase in global warming. That being said, the main concern is that it needs to be fixed. It really doesn't need a transition. It just needed to be written differently. I didn't change it too much though.

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