Question

Any one can check my writing which is in comments

Answer 1

the title about how to be happy

Answer 2

For one to truly live life to the fullest, one must find happiness, to which is often elusive yet still, perplexingly, can be found just about anywhere. Happiness is relative to the individual and his and her pursuits. A myriad of choices can lead to happiness, one only must endure trials and failure, being mentally sound in the process, to find such solace and joy.

Answer 3

how many marks u give it

Answer 4

Try using that as your first paragraph, however, do look for term synonymous with those above so that you aren't guilty. To be blunt, your paper is full of fallacious statements. I think you should look into particulars and the meaning of words--don't confuse can and should...I would give it a C-

Answer 5

IT is pretty weak,

Answer 6

But I want to help you.

Answer 7

So let me give you some advice, please hold for a general piece, and then later you will receive an amended second paragraph.

Answer 8

iam listen to you

Answer 9

"The first reason to be happy"--Let's deconstruct what you are trying to say.

Answer 10

using "the first" suggests, there is a finite list or the reason you are listing is the primary reason which isn't so. I recommend stating that there are a variety or myriad of reasons, then going on to list virtuous activities--do not be specific however. User general settlements to assert your reasoning.

Answer 11

"If you get rest, you will not get a headache" -- fallacious--

Answer 12

Will be back

Answer 13

Don't say "society" --the is far too ambiguous,

Answer 14

For your 'paper' establish several points, one of which will be addressed in the body paragraphs

Answer 15

"In addition to the first reason, having good friends can cause happiness. Friends make your life better and easy. If you need help from anybody, the first person who will help you is your friend. Also you can enjoy your time by going out with them to cinema, playing football, and swimming for example. " --This is pretty weak, I would suggest explaining how happiness is relative to the individual, explaining what it is(by defining it), and not listing how it may be caused. You can explain such things as defining pleasure, joy, differentiating between various terms

Answer 16

Do you need anything else?

Answer 17

can you write to me the steps to write good "focus on effect and causes" essay
please