Can any one PLEASE Review my essay.. My essay topic is how cars have affected us positively and negatively..

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Can any one PLEASE Review my essay..  My essay topic is how cars have affected us positively and negatively..

anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

can someone please revise my essay for me

anonymous · Answer

ok well first... none of this should belong in your report.

"While deciding on what to write and what essay to cover, I decided to write about Cars and their enemies by James Q. Wilson.  My paper will be about how cars have changed our lives negative or positively and or both.  James Q. Wilson’s essay cars and enemies was about how in our century people cannot live without cars."

anonymous · Answer

so how can i start my essay i always have a hard time