Question

can someone proofread what i have so far on my paper and feel free to give any advice on what i should add to the continuing paragraph at the end

Answer 1

However, after the Cold War,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, American culture and influence would be felt in almost every aspect of German life.

put a comma there

Answer 2

Change this
Upon joining NATO, Germany vowed to rearm itself, to help defend Western Europe from the on slought of a Soviet threat.
To this
Upon joining NATO, Germany vowed to rearm itself and to help defend Western Europe from the on slought of a Soviet threat.

Answer 3

Following (right here) Germany becoming a part of NATO the Warsaw Pact would later be formed, this was the Soviet military response to Germany entering NATO.

you have an extra space...

Answer 4

you very first comment, was that in reference to my last paragraph

Answer 5

no in the beginning

Answer 6

ok

Answer 7

Soviet Union Fell, the Berlin wall was then torn down and families were finally able to REUNITE not reunit.

Answer 8

just to let you know, i haven't done my spell check yet. I am aware of those kind of mistakes, i needed help more so on the last paragraph because i am stuck

Answer 9

The Berlin Airlift was designed to provide food and supplies may were without because of the blockage of railroads and streets, all caused by the Berlin Wall.
THIS JUST NEEDS SOME RETHINKING

Answer 10

thanks

Answer 11

America has always played a significant role in other countries culture. So It is no surprise that they had an effect on Germany's.
TAKE AWAY SO, OR COMBINE THE SENTENCES

Answer 12

That is it for now ^_^

Answer 13

Nice report *Thumbs up!

Answer 14

thank you very much

Answer 15

anytime lemon-lime

Answer 16

This is the finished copy I also posted on your History question.