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Identify the problem with the following sentence. As Karen drove her Mustang up to the take-out window, it began to rattle. A. wordiness B. unclear meaning C. wrong voice

OpenStudy (anonymous):

B. unclear meaning. It doesn't state why the take-out window began to rattle.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Unclear meaning - was the "it" the Mustang or the take-out window?

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