Question

Is this sentence written correctly..On the wa home, the driver made a wrong turn; he headed towards Los Angeles rather than San Diego.

Answer 1

it should be: On the way home, The driver made the wrong turn. He headed towards Los Angelas, Rather than San Diego.

Answer 2

Yes, your sentence is grammatically correct. DarkSky909 is also correct. You can use a semi-colon or a period. The comma after Los Angeles is not needed, but it is not incorrect to use it.

Answer 3

On the way home, the driver made a wrong turn. He headed towards Los Angeles rather than San Diego.

Answer 4

It's clear. It's not obviously wrong. It's written in modern casual style. I thinks that it's just fine