Question

I'm doing a research about natural disasters and maybe someone could proof read it and edit some stuff if necessary?

For now, only the intoduction :)

Answer 1

Natural disasters are disasters caused by nature. Natural disasters are something we cannot fight against or win since a man is powerless against nature. It can lead to many horrible things like financial, environmental, industrials or human losses. Natural disasters can be a surprise; it hits different places at different times. A natural disaster is like facing a lion; if you don’t take the necessary precautions it will harm you. There are many forms of natural disasters such as earthquake, volcano, flood, tornado, tsunami and lightning.

Answer 2

I think this is good. Now in the main part tell about the different forms of disasters, take the example of the recent natural disasters like the earthquake in Indonesia and Japan. The devastating effects of the earthquake in Japan citing the example of the damage in Fukushima nuclear plant.
End the paper with the precautionary steps we could take to be prepared for these.

Answer 3

Thanks! Yeah.. I'm thinking to write about all natural disasters in short because I do not want to write about one specific and to end up nowhere :P and maybe write about a famous earthquake or volcano. I was worried about the conclusion! Do you think I should write ALL the steps for ALL natural diasters?

Answer 4

Give a brief description about every natural disaster

Answer 5

Will do :)

Answer 6

Thank you!