Question

Plz tell me what you think and how to improve it maybe.
This is a poem to my best friend whom I have looked up to a thousand times.
Whose kind and pureness heart makes people want to follow and appreciate.
After your beat or defeated from a game showing things are ok comforting you as you get back up and fight for the things you want.
Because when I needed that hand he was there to support my cause as I was for him.
Knowing that you are strong and fearless showing everyone the strength he and I posses.
About the thoughts running through the crowds’ minds and the coaches seeing the actio

Answer 1

i like it lol I wish i could write4 peoms like this i suck at writing poems :)

Answer 2

i wrote it in like 5 min in class lmfao im good at bsing things and this is what i came up with.

Answer 3

hahha well it good

Answer 4

thx :D <3

Answer 5

anytime <3 haha