Can someone help me fix this thesis statement. My fifteen week grade should be a CSS becasue I Have made some progress during this past weeks.

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anonymous · Answer

How about this?
Through diligence and perseverance, during these past weeks, I have made tremendous progress.  My hard work and dedication is deserving of a fifteen-week grade of a CSS.

anonymous · Answer

I have made progress through diligence and perseverance of the past several weeks. My efforts should be rewarded with a fifteen-week grade of CSS.

lanre · Answer

As a result of the progress i have made in the past weeks, my fifteen-week grade should be CSS.