Question

My heart...

It'll burst, I'll break, Please no more!
It can't hold on now, Please no more!
One stab, you gave, Please no more!
That unbearable pain, Please no more!
My tears are turning, Please no more!
It's blood, those drops, Please no more!
And the holes, those holes, Please no more!
My shadow is dying, Please no more!
Mercy! Oh, Mercy!, Please no more!
It drips, the misery, Please no more!
I beg before you, Please no more!
It'll die, I'll die, Please no more!
What else can I say? Please no more!
It's my last breath, Please no more!
No more, no more, Please no more!

Answer 1

awesome

Answer 2

Superb.... :)

Answer 3

applause ..... bravo bravo

Answer 4

beautiful !!

Answer 5

wowwww ghalib ka asaar saaf zahir hai :P

Answer 6

@wasiqss lol, tum ne kabhi ghalib parha bhi hai? :P

Answer 7

hehe kia tmhe lagta hai? :P

Answer 8

hehe is pai jaa kr meri profile mai parho kia likha hain is pai :P jb is ki story samajh aye gi :D

Answer 9

oh Mr.child's play doll to ya bat ha

Answer 10

ye meri future wife ko devotion hai :D

Answer 11

omg :P

Answer 12

I like this (:

Answer 13

I think i just read the most beautiful thing on this earth." ^_^

Answer 14

Thank you!! :)

Dude i am so fanning you,
your poetry is out of this world!!. XD

Answer 15

thanks @TheOlympicnomad

Answer 16

Np, @physicsme

I Just can't back away when i see good talent ;),
and my man you have got it :).

Answer 17

How much poetry have you written?

Answer 18

there are two more in the closed questions, you can read 'em if you want..
and these are just pages from my diary.
and I'm a girl :)

Answer 19

Oh sorry :).

Answer 20

K, i am so reading them!!.

Answer 21

Wow you are even better then Shake sphere girl!!.

Answer 22

lol, thank you, didn't know I was that good :)

Answer 23

Well you know now ;).

Answer 24

So...
You gonna become a poet?.

Answer 25

aren't I already? lol
and my plan is medical till now :)

Answer 26

I mean they don't make that much money and all,

But you just got to show the world your amazing poetry
They will miss out HUGE!!.

Answer 27

lol, ya

Answer 28

And trust me it would be sad to waste such a precious poet like you ;).

Answer 29

lol,wow, your compliments is actually making me think about publishing my writings :)
you were right @annas

Answer 30

Like the poem people write now are roses are reds violets are blue.....,

They need something new like you!!!,
to be inspired and refreshed :).

Answer 31

Thank you :),

You definitely should :),
Two thumbs way up for you my dear!! :).

Answer 32

How old are you?

Answer 33

yeah, all my poetry full of pain, my style :)

Answer 34

I'm 18 :)

Answer 35

WOWzers (O_o)

Most poets are like 30 when they hit talent :).

You have a gift my dear :).

Answer 36

lol, thanks, and age is just a number :)

Answer 37

That is the way i love poetry :).

Pain,Sorrow,misery :)

Answer 38

Ya, i know :).

Answer 39

I write poetry to about my feelings or how i see someone else in view :)

Answer 40

and the poets should then be all about pain, sorrow ad misery :)

Answer 41

Or i have dreams that inspire me :).

Answer 42

you should post some of you work here then:)

Answer 43

Ya, Boo with the Violets are red stuff :P.

Answer 44

Ya, but i am not half as good as you are :).

Answer 45

And plus my punctuation sucks :).

Answer 46

lol, i used to think i wasn't good till now, you should post yours, maybe we'll find talent :)

Answer 47

lol, :)

Answer 48

Ok, i will because you inspired me :).

Answer 49

But i have to dig underneath the floorboards of my room that's where i keep my poetry ;).

Answer 50

lol, yeah you do that :)
and btw I dig under my bed :P

Answer 51

lol, Ya dirty work :),

We are so the same good minds think alike ;).

Answer 52

lol, yup :)
us ""great"" minds think alike

Answer 53

Yes we do or poetic mind's technically :).

Answer 54

@physicsme getting popular huh?? See, i had told you you write the best poems... ;)

Answer 55

yap i m always right @physicsme ;)