Question

Would anybody like to help me proofread/edit my essay? It's comparing 1984 and Cyrano de Bergerac, and the harmful effects that Julia and Roxane cause on the main characters.

Answer 1

here it is, for anybody that is interested:

Answer 2

I am looking it over as we speak. Should be done soon.

Answer 3

Here you go. Hope this helps.

Answer 4

Thank you so much! I took your advice about the analysis, so hopefully it'll be better.