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Answer 1

Look at the thesis and the information you will use that you handed in at the end of the last unit. How can you organize that information effectively? Create an outline that looks like this:
I. Your complete introductory paragraph, with your thesis identified. Write it well, using appropriate transitions.
II. The Body of the Essay
A. The topic of the first body paragraph you will use.
1. The first evidence you will use (or only evidence, if it is an anecdote or a similar plan)
2. Second evidence, etc.
B. The topic of your second paragraph
1. The first evidence you will use (or only evidence, if it is an anecdote or a similar plan)
2. Second evidence, etc
C. Continue this pattern for as many paragraphs as you plan to use.
III. A brief description of your thoughts on a powerful conclusion--what strategy will you use?

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Youth smoking is as big a problem as it ever was. Parents and teachers are often at a loss as to how to deal with the fact that their children may already smoke or the chance that they may become hooked on cigarettes in the future. I am a teen myself and I think that the problem starts with the parents, and cigarette Manufacturers. The parents have the cigarettes in the house so that teen can get their hands on them. The cigarette companies make cigarettes look way too appealing. Their target audience is ages 16-25, because those people have not been hooked by this drug. Everyone knows the risks and how they effect our health. Smoking is linked to not only lung cancer, but also other respiratory problems like coughing, wheezing, and shortness of breath.
Teens are tired of being lectured about smoking. If they want to smoke, they are going to smoke because they are way too easy to get. Teens can get cigarettes at gas stations & from their parents. The more a parent tells a child “no” the more the child wants to do it, so they go behind the parents back and smoke.
Tobacco company’s target teenagers because they need 4,000 new smokers every day to replace the ones who have quit or died, or the company goes out of business. they think kids are too inexperienced to grasp the reality of addiction, and that children will try smoking to see what it's like...addiction does the rest. Eighty-five percent of underage smokers purchase the three most heavily advertised Brands: Marlboro, Newport, or Camel. Almost 1,000 of them will die prematurely from tobacco related disease.