Question

is anyone good with like editing and stuff? i need a little help...

Answer 1

Youth smoking is as big a problem as it ever was. No doubt about that.
Parents and teachers are often at a loss as to how to deal with the fact that their children may already smoke or the chance that they may become hooked on cigarettes in the future. I am a teen myself and I think that the problem starts with the parents, and cigarette Manufacturers. The parents have the cigarettes in the house so that teen can get their hands on them. The cigarette companies make cigarettes look way too appealing. Their target audience is normally from the ages of 16-25, because those people have not been hooked by this drug. Another thing is tobacco company’s target teenagers because they need At Least 4,000 new smokers every day to replace the ones who have quit or died from smoking, or the company goes out of business. They think kids are too inexperienced to grasp the reality of addiction, and that children will try smoking to see what it's like and then...addiction does the rest. Eighty-five percent of underage smokers purchase the three most heavily advertised Brands: Marlboro, Newport, or Camel. Almost 1,000 of them will die prematurely from tobacco related disease.

i need help editing this to make it sound better

Answer 2

ohaky , give me a lil bit.

Answer 3

**ohkay

Answer 4

alright thank you :)))

Answer 5

You actually did pretty good , i just added and deleted a couple things but here...



Youth smoking is one of the biggest problems that were dealing with today , No doubt about that. Parents and teachers are very often at a loss on how to deal with the fact that their children have been smoking or the chance that they may become hooked on cigarettes in the future. I am a teen myself and I think that the problem starts with the parents, and cigarette Manufacturers. The parents that do smoke have the cigarettes laying around in the house not paying attention to them and the teens can easily get their hands on them. Plus the cigarette companies make cigarettes look way too appealing in their commericals and adds. Their target audience is normally from the ages of 16-25, because those people have not been hooked by this drug. Another thing is tobacco company’s target teenagers because they need At Least 4,000 new smokers every day to replace the ones who have quit or died from smoking, or the company goes out of business. They think kids are too inexperienced to grasp the reality of addiction, and that most children will try smoking to see what it's like and try to exprience something new and then...addiction does the rest. Eighty-five percent of underage smokers purchase the three most heavily advertised Brands: Marlboro, Newport, or Camel. What the teens do not know and what the commericals and adds dont show is Almost 1,000 of them will die prematurely from tobacco related disease.