Question

Why?
Whose at fault, whose to blame?
If our existence didn't exist,
There wouldn't be the heaven we crave,
Or the hell, the fire burning,
No Adam or Eve, no devil set free,
No world, no earth, no end,
Why wait for our impending death?
Who will love, who will hate?
No man, no games, no tricks,
Whose heart will mend and break?
This is why you made mine?
And the sins, whose will they be?
What are deeds, good or bad?
No tears falling, no rain, no sky,
What are rivers and oceans and seas?
No evil, no wrongs piling up,
What are hills and mountains and heaps?
No anger, no fury, or my wrath

Answer 1

What are storms, the blizzards, the undying heat?
Why bring us to this everlasting pain?
I thought you never made mistakes,
My gift of life ? no, it's a curse,
It can't be undone, now, I am trapped,
Tell me God, why oh, why?

Answer 2

Superb... :)

Answer 3

Once again an amazing poem. :)

Answer 4

super amazing...

Answer 5

Lol, yes. :P
An super amazing poem.

Answer 6

thank you guys :)

Answer 7

No problem. Keep up the amazing work. :)

Answer 8

Can't wait until your next poem!

Answer 9

Compose it right now.. @physicsme

Answer 10

lol, i wrote this today.

Answer 11

you'll get one poem per day :P

Answer 12

Lol, well then I can't wait until tomorrows poem . :P

Answer 13

Publish a book.. a collection of poems..

Answer 14

^ I'm with him. I think you would be an great poet and I'm sure lots of people would want to read your work.

Answer 15

Just wondering but have you ever thought about becoming a poet or do you just like doing poetry as a hobby?

Answer 16

She is on her way to be a professional poet.. :)

Answer 17

I write poems just when I feel like it, sort of an outlet for me...
My plan till now is to be a doctor :)

Answer 18

I used to write poetry to but I just sorta stop a couple of years ago. I guess I just sorta ran out of inspiration.

A doctor? That's still cool. Being doctor has allot of pluses these days. But if you would ever want to be poet I know that you would make an excellent one. :)

Answer 19

yeah, reconsider at least once.. you will be a great poet..

Answer 20

Maybe it could be like a side job?

Answer 21

I am more of a closet poet, lol

and @Miss_Deva you can share some of you old work, if you want.

Answer 22

lol, to bad. The world could use a poet like you. :P

Lol, that's if I can any of it. I put most of it away in a chest in my attic.

Answer 23

Though I would love to share them...that is once I find them. :P

Answer 24

*find

Answer 25

What area do you want to be in for a doctor?

Answer 26

What field I meant. :P

Answer 27

I guess I'll probably go for surgery,
First I need to get into a med school lol :)

Answer 28

Lol, I could never do surgery. I hate the site of blood and I have a weak stomach. So I wouldn't make much of a doctor. :P

Answer 29

It is awesome. Superb.

Answer 30

Spell-bound. Once again. Feels like...

Like a tragic gale of words. As if a torpedo of thoughts just hit me and exploded.
Words to express, huh? I'm lost.