Why? Whose at fault, whose to blame? If our existence didn't exist, There wouldn't be the heaven we crave, Or the hell, the fire burning, No Adam or Eve, no devil set free, No world, no earth, no end, Why wait for our impending death? Who will love, who will hate? No man, no games, no tricks, Whose heart will mend and break? This is why you made mine? And the sins, whose will they be? What are deeds, good or bad? No tears falling, no rain, no sky, What are rivers and oceans and seas? No evil, no wrongs piling up, What are hills and mountains and heaps? No anger, no fury, or my wrath
What are storms, the blizzards, the undying heat? Why bring us to this everlasting pain? I thought you never made mistakes, My gift of life ? no, it's a curse, It can't be undone, now, I am trapped, Tell me God, why oh, why?
Once again an amazing poem. :)
Lol, yes. :P An super amazing poem.
thank you guys :)
No problem. Keep up the amazing work. :)
Can't wait until your next poem!
Compose it right now.. @physicsme
lol, i wrote this today.
you'll get one poem per day :P
Lol, well then I can't wait until tomorrows poem . :P
Publish a book.. a collection of poems..
^ I'm with him. I think you would be an great poet and I'm sure lots of people would want to read your work.
Just wondering but have you ever thought about becoming a poet or do you just like doing poetry as a hobby?
She is on her way to be a professional poet.. :)
I write poems just when I feel like it, sort of an outlet for me... My plan till now is to be a doctor :)
I used to write poetry to but I just sorta stop a couple of years ago. I guess I just sorta ran out of inspiration. A doctor? That's still cool. Being doctor has allot of pluses these days. But if you would ever want to be poet I know that you would make an excellent one. :)
yeah, reconsider at least once.. you will be a great poet..
Maybe it could be like a side job?
I am more of a closet poet, lol and @Miss_Deva you can share some of you old work, if you want.
lol, to bad. The world could use a poet like you. :P Lol, that's if I can any of it. I put most of it away in a chest in my attic.
Though I would love to share them...that is once I find them. :P
What area do you want to be in for a doctor?
What field I meant. :P
I guess I'll probably go for surgery, First I need to get into a med school lol :)
Lol, I could never do surgery. I hate the site of blood and I have a weak stomach. So I wouldn't make much of a doctor. :P
It is awesome. Superb.
Spell-bound. Once again. Feels like... Like a tragic gale of words. As if a torpedo of thoughts just hit me and exploded. Words to express, huh? I'm lost.