What do you think of this poem?
Evanescence
the transients on the blanch
glittering nectar in a dimple
thou walk via the shadow of a caterpillar
above a neat, narrow path
so nomadic thy mind
so aloof celestial zenith
thus time is thirsty
memories could slyly fled into thy eyes
we were flowers
here today, gone tomorrow

Question

What do you think of this poem?
Evanescence
the transients on the blanch
glittering nectar in a dimple
thou walk via the shadow of a caterpillar 
above a neat, narrow path
so nomadic thy mind
so aloof celestial zenith 
thus time is thirsty
memories could slyly fled into thy eyes
we were flowers
here today, gone tomorrow

anonymous · Answer

@heena

anonymous · Answer

u wrote this o.O??

anonymous · Answer

Of course
waiting for comments

anonymous · Answer

really u wrote that :O i didnt knw dat u are poet too :)

anonymous · Answer

i mean true and nice lines and might be that the reality of life...

anonymous · Answer

no, just yeasterday after you told me the bad news,and then mom told me that her colleague's mom passed away....

anonymous · Answer

life is evanescent,
so make every second count

anonymous · Answer

that's a really beautiful poem @Frank_Shank

anonymous · Answer

Thanks~!

anonymous · Answer

go on :)

anonymous · Answer

An truly well written and amazing poem. :)

apoorvk · Answer

haha great!! shakespearish! i liked it immensely :)

anonymous · Answer

Beautiful! Did you write this yourslef?

anonymous · Answer

I Like it and i am not a huge fan of poems

anonymous · Answer

Thanks you guy

anonymous · Answer

No problem. Keep up the awesome work. :)

anonymous · Answer

right life is evanescent, dunno suddenly anything can happen so cheer ur every moment of life :)