The sentence below could be from a research report. Select the best way to improve it.

The reviews were published no one saw them, they were still asleep.

A. The reviews were published and no one saw them and they were still asleep.
B. The reviews were published, but no one saw them because they were still asleep.
C. The reviews were published, no one saw them, they were still asleep.
D. The reviews, when they were published. no one saw, they were still asleep.

Question

The sentence below could be from a research report. Select the best way to improve it. 

The reviews were published no one saw them, they were still asleep.

 
	A.	The reviews were published and no one saw them and they were still asleep.	   
	B.	The reviews were published, but no one saw them because they were still asleep.	   
	C.	The reviews were published, no one saw them, they were still asleep.	   
	D.	The reviews, when they were published. no one saw, they were still asleep.

anonymous · Answer

B is best - but again, "they" is plural and should not be used to refer to the singular "no one"!  Be sure to tell whomever gave you this - they will think you are brilliant! ;)

anonymous · Answer

thank you and I will be sure to tell my teacher that

anonymous · Answer

Excellent!  Good luck with your English class - keep using openstudy.com and you will score an "A" in there for sure, if you haven't already!  *I have already given you an "A" for great manners.*