Question

This keeps popping into my head i guess its a poem of some sort what do you think?

I am but black against the white.

A bluejay with no blue.

A cowboy with no horse.

I am the blue rose among the red.

The mouse with no tail

Why was i born into this world i don't know.
The reason i see in none. But a reason i was born there is.

Answer 1

AMAZING! and fits rite into mi life ur good

Answer 2

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Answer 3

? lol i like the poem

Answer 4

Thx this just keeps poping in my head so i decided to tell it.

Answer 5

cool

Answer 6

This is truly amazing <3

Answer 7

I dont see whats amazing in it

Answer 8

it just popped into my head

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cause i can relate. it is really good!

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dont put yourself down! be proud!

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...ok

Answer 12

i realte to it too he doesnt get it haha its an amazing work

Answer 13

I know what you mean by relate to his poem this poem like explains most of who i am

Answer 14

WOW wolfboy this is pretty good

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thx

Answer 16

Like serious I might quote this with your permission when I do my speech next week

Answer 17

Uh can you say i wrote it then if you do go ahead

Answer 18

But i have had people take my credit from me alot so plz dont take credit

Answer 19

Oh of course I wouldn't do it without saying you wrote it! Thanks bro ^_^

Answer 20

its ok

Answer 21

I don't advantage like that

Answer 22

ok

Answer 23

Man my poem is attracting alot of attention

Answer 24

its kinda neat

Answer 25

Wow Wolfboy its nice poem :D

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Um thx

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ZhangYan i cant message you unless you fan me

Answer 28

hahah i told you, you write really well

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Plz people who read this leave feedback

Answer 30

it is interesting hard to follow

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but i like it

Answer 32

i love it. the use of metaphors and imagery is stunning :) 8/10 try to make more flow. needs a bit of work around the edges but the prospect is good.

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Tx guys it popped into my head over and over so i wrote it down

Answer 34

It's good - in the sense that it's pretty *raw* and ironic. But you could make this rhyme easily and bring more flow if you like. Still, a pretty good job! :)

Answer 35

Thx

Answer 36

Luv the poem, it's very deep, and inspiring to tell people we need to figure out who we truly are and what we are not :) GOod job, you should title it though =)

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Thx
for reading (EVERYONE!)

Answer 38

I will tittle it

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THX!

Answer 40

wow th was really nice

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Thx

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I made this myself

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THat is amazing

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Thx kasi

Answer 45

wow!

Answer 46

sounds sort of depressing kool

Answer 47

I guess but it is filled with alot of meaning. Alot of people can connect to this

Answer 48

tru dat
i get wat ur sayin 2
its a kool poem.

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Do you think i should call it- Who Am I?

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Or do you guys have any ideas?

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yea

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or what am i?

Answer 53

Thats good to but does anyone else have ideas?

Answer 54

i got a poem but the only one's i am good at are the complete oposet at u think bout it

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The summer's heat is nothing to compare to her warmth.
The springs blooming flowers are not even close the beauty of her
Smile.
And honeysuckle has no comparison to her lips.
She is my world.

Answer 56

It needs alittle better flow you should ask it as a question

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kool thanks

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my email is gttn blown up by this lol.

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XD

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I am trying to find a good tittle

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these are my ideas so far
Who am i?
or
what am i?

Answer 62

reminds me of the song a horse with no name :P

Answer 63

lol do you have any ideas for the name?

Answer 64

I seen many similar writings like this. It has a lot of irony in it.

Answer 65

Yea but what i like about this poem is alot of people can connect to this

Answer 66

yah cuzz no one seems to fit in anywhere :)

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Yes. But do you have ideas for what the name could be?

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I like hte line I am the blue rose among the red.

Make that your title :)

Answer 69

hmm that is a good idea

Answer 70

good poem

Answer 71

Angels is back :D

Answer 72

wow wolf u got ppl all over this nice

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I know its crazy

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I might start writing more now lol

Answer 75

you so should.. i would love it.. btw r u in flvs?

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what?

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It's great @Wolfboy poem suits me

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Thx a lot i appreciate it And i think that alot of people can connect to this

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WoW @Wolfboy if this Masterpiece just popped in your head you really got a creative mind there that can discover many amazing and impossible things the world yet needs to see and hear ;),

All in All this is amazing!! :D.

Answer 80

Thx for your comments and everyone who looked. I was at first thinking that people would think his poem is really bad. But now i see all of the meaning and how people can connect to it. I appreciate all of your support and medals and comments. I am going to start posting more poems now :D

Answer 81

Dude this is inspirational!!,

And i would love to see what you can create next ;).

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Well i will make sure to post more of my poems that come into my head... Alot of them i keep rejecting until they go away :( BUT thanks to all you guys i now have more confidence in my writings.... Thanx everyone.

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Actually i am thinking up some poem ideas right now so if you guys know anything i can write then type it up so it can give me a idea.

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thats really good :)

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thx

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Anymore comments?

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Well guys thanks alot for reading :)

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noice

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Never reject your minds thoughts :), I am glad you decided to let your thoughts sink in and fill your head and stopped rejecting them

I once did the same thing i had these thoughts popping in and out of my head but i kept rejecting them because i was to worried with what other people would think of them because they were different then most peoples thoughts that i could rearrange them into a masterpiece if i put the right words in order but i kept rejecting them and they finally disappeared gone forever and i regret rejecting them every single day to what i could of wrote :(, So im glad you didn't reject your thoughts like i did :). You rock @Wolfboy!!.

Answer 90

I really love it, what makes it amazing is the contrast. You have little grammatical errors, other wise brilliant :)

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Thx XD i noticed the errors

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You're looking for the purpose of life, when the purpose of life is to simply live. Wow, who wouldda thought that the purpose of life is just to live life?

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Live life and make it meaningful to you. No one else will do that for you so you have to do it.

Answer 94

SWEET poem Wolf! :D:D

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nice!

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thx

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I think that it means that you're different than anyone else, you're set apart from those around you. It's really good!