Question

4 sentences! Does this make sense?

Answer 1

“Ameri”.

I snap out my hypnotic state, vehemently jumping back. Wait, what page are we on? I think to myself.

“Sorry, whiplash.”

I cleverly play off as I flip to the next page in my math textbook. I can hear laughter from the other side of the room.

Answer 2

yea

Answer 3

I like the choices of those words. They create interesting images when you read the sentences. Nice job there

Answer 4

Thanks, i'm a 13 year old writer :)

What do you think?

http://www.missliterati.com/chapters/4fba2ee3721fb21176002939#bccs

Answer 5

I'm reading it now :) I write too, but only poetry. I think writers are so cool because the way their brains work is really intriguing. (Well my thinking is simple though ;)

Answer 6

You can post on that site you know? poetry too :)

Answer 7

I don't think mine is very good. Thanks for suggesting though

Answer 8

Post it bruh! :D

Answer 9

I will think about it :D
Is that story about you?

Answer 10

Yes :)

Answer 11

Do it, you never know and life is to short :)

Answer 12

I'm really introverted. I don't have lots of friends. I just read and write. And I'm not ready to post my poem.

Sounds like a new poem to me haha :)

Answer 13

Well, that's fine. When you're comfortable :)

I'm just trying to give you some push, because that's what everyone needs once in a while! Good luck! When you do post, message me :)

Answer 14

Or message me what you have :D

Answer 15

I sure will when I'm ready. Thanks for your advice. You seem very nice and pretty too. Bet everyone loves you ;)

Answer 16

Thank you! Lol, I wish :P
Can't wait for when you are :)

Answer 17

When are you gonna post a new chapter, I wanna read more. Your life is interesting!

Answer 18

Lol, maybe tomorrow, subscribe if you want :D

Answer 19

I definitely will as soon as I post something on it. Where are you from by the way?

Answer 20

Florida :)

Answer 21

I'm from Canada :)

Answer 22

omg, cool, right above me :D

Answer 23

I wanna go to the states when i have a chance. Just a poor dude with no friends and money :(

Answer 24

I doubt that, you have a chance. Canada is awesome! Lol, I'll post 2 chapters day. Don't worry, I be your poetry is amazing. You seem really nice :)

Answer 25

http://www.missliterati.com/chapters/4fc8e67162e8d42ac009573e#bccs

Answer 26

I've already read that before i logged on here :)

Answer 27

Lol, I wrote to chapters today. Thanks for keeping up :)

Answer 28

No worries. Keep practicing you good work :)

Answer 29

Thanks! You too! :)