Question

Not sure whether im heading in the write direction.

Prompt "“We know our identity when we are happy with ourselves, not how people view us.”

expository/persuasive introduction.

Answer 1

The role undertaken by today’s contemporary society has been apprehended by the thought of disregarding anyone who looks different, thinks different, or sees different. The ecstatic feeling when someone compliments us on our appearance overthrows the feeling of us when we aim to achieve our objectives, such as attaining the highest academic result in, for example, an english exam. Our minds are hinted with jealousy and covetousness, which ultimately catalyses the need to sustain a sense of peace within us. Thus, rather than being individualistic, there is a need to be expressed with an individual’s approval, which demonstrates the societal influences that imperatively signpost the dignity and distinctiveness of every one of us. Yet this heavily explicates the need to be recognized by others, which sanction us to conform to society. But it’s not until we understand the obstacles overleaped and barriers broken, which we understand our own achievements that enable us to accurately identify the contentment placed when we appreciate us.