Help? Pleeaaase? C'mon! All you have to do is read it! I even wrote it all out already! It's an essay is all! It's for the school I want to go through next year. (Helpful suggestions are always lovely too!) :) I'd really like to prove to my mom that I can do things...So I really need this to be good.

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anonymous · Answer

anonymous · Answer

The blanks are just the name of the school...

wolfboy · Answer

It looks good to me...

anonymous · Answer

Well as long as it sounds decent :P