Q1. Correct the grammatical mistakes in the following sentences.
1. No less than fifty men were injured in the accident.
2. He is the taller of the two brothers.
3. He would make a better engineer than a doctor.
4. I do not like such movies, which are immoral.
5. Poultry has given him great profit.

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Q1.  Correct the grammatical mistakes in the following sentences.          
1. No less than fifty men were injured in the accident.
2. He is the taller of the two brothers.
3. He would make a better engineer than a doctor.
4. I do not like such movies, which are immoral.
5. Poultry has given him great profit.

anonymous · Answer

"No less than" means you were surprised in the number. I don't think it needs to be changed.

2.) Of the two brothers, he is the taller.
This would prepare the reader for the comparison of who is "taller".

3.) He would make a better engineer than he would a doctor. 
He would make a doctor is distinctive from "than a doctor would make"

4.) "I do not like movies, which are immoral" or "I do not like immoral movies."
Pronoun references.
 
5.) Poultry business has given him great profit.
"Business" adds a more descriptive noun.

Hope that helps! n_n