Question

Who wants to read my research paper on [Teen Pregnancy] and give me their feedback on what changes I should make? (See attachment)

Answer 1

There's a few grammatical errors (do you mind if I highlight them and post the file?) But other than that, you did good! It was easy to read. :)

Answer 2

I don't mind at all! :)

Answer 3

Anybody done looking over the paper? :)

Answer 4

Okay! I got half way through it but my dad is about to turn the power off for something so I'll be back on in a couple of hours!

Here's what I have so far. I highlighted everything that needs to be fixed in red and then in parentheses put why.

Answer 5

Thanks!

Answer 6

Yeah, no problem!

Answer 7

Thanks @rebeccaskell94!

Answer 8

Your research paper [Teen Pregnancy] is really amazing! You did a wonderful job! Here is the attachment... I just fixed it up a little with the grammar and spelling. Besides that, you did an excellent job on it and good luck!

Hope that helps! n_n

Answer 9

Thank you! :)

Answer 10

Your welcome! n_n

Take care!