Which sentence is the most correct, clear, and concise? a) In order to achieve a life that is both successful and rewarding, individuals must focus on developing one set of skills that they can sell and many outside interests. b) In order to live a life that is both successful and rewarding, one must develop a particular skill that is in demand by the marketplace and diverse outside interests to amuse one throughout life. c) For a successful, rewarding life, an individual must develop a marketable skill and diverse interests. d) To have a successful, rewarding life, individuals

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Which sentence is the most correct, clear, and concise?    a) In order to achieve a life that is both successful and rewarding, individuals must focus on developing one set of skills that they can sell and many outside interests.     b) In order to live a life that is both successful and rewarding, one must develop a particular skill that is in demand by the marketplace and diverse outside interests to amuse one throughout life.     c) For a successful, rewarding life, an individual must develop a marketable skill and diverse interests.     d) To have a successful, rewarding life, individuals

anonymous · Answer

I like the first one (c) the best - it gets the point across. 

I would further tweak the sentence and turn it into:
For a successful and rewarding life, individuals must develop marketable skills as well as diverse interests.

Marketable still sounds funny though.