Question

Know Me, Broken, By My Master
Teach Thee On, Child, Love Hereafter

Into The Flood Again
Same Old Trip It Was Back Then
So I Made A Big Mistake
Try To See It Once My Way

Drifting, Body's Soul Exertion
Flying, Not Yet Quite The Notion

Into The Flood Again
Same Old Trip It Was Back Then
So I Made A Big Mistake
Try To See It Once My Way

Into The Flood Again
Same Old Trip It Was Back Then
So I Made A Big Mistake
Try To See It Once My Way


Have I Gone?
And Left You Here Alone?

Am I Wrong?
Have I Run Too Far To Get Home?
Have I Gone?
And Left You Here

Answer 1

try posting it in the writing group..im sure it will be much appreciated :DD us math nerds here dont know a thing about poetry unfortunately

Answer 2

An truly well written and amazing poem but like @lgbasallote, you should put it in the writing group.That way it will get more views and feedback. :)