I'm supposed to criticize a poem and I need to see what it's like so could someone criticize this poem? (It's NOT the same poem I'm going to criticize, you have my word ;))

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lifeisadangerousgame · Answer

Imagination

Sucked into another world
Unknown,untold
Never knowing what mysteries it may hold
Letting it free, unlocking a lifetime of possibilities

Exploring my mind, seeing what it can do
Never a limit nor restraint
Losing time is a thing of the past
Now allowing everything to last

Lost in my mind, lost in the flow
My imagination's power begins to grow
Past the sky through the universe
My mind begins to fly
It's time to live and never die

I can soar like an eagle
And sing like a nightingale singing a fast and cheerful tale
With the beauty and clever wit like a fox
With the speed of a ship with wind blowing its sail

But alas, lack of use destroys imagination
Killed like flowers during frost
Without my imagination I can dream for nothing
To lose a God given gift is beyond shame
Never again to be the same

Without an imagination I can wish for nothing
But with it, I have questions to be answered
Adventures to be had, and places to discover
All I need is an imagination.

wolfboy · Answer

Overall i would say its pretty good but some lines wording need to be differently worded to help with the flow

lifeisadangerousgame · Answer

Cool, thanks!

wolfboy · Answer

Np