Question

Opening to my story
Heavy Rain

Answer 1

The year is 2101, my name is Rex I’m a runner; I deliver packages to places and people. The packages are of all sizes, big, small, wide, and fat. We deliver everything for a price. Us runner’s don’t talk much about what we do, you could say we are not the most social type of people. Many don’t talk to us because they are either afraid of us or they don’t like what we do. It works like this; if you have a specific skill set then they find you they take you from whatever life you may have had at a young age and train you to run. We are given a set of rules to obey, “Never open the package, never be late, and don’t get involved.” I broke one of these rules. It all started with that one package…

Answer 2

im in it too :P

Answer 3

what?

Answer 4

im in teh closed question >:]

Answer 5

lol dude there is option next to open question that say closed question you can see all close questions from there -_-

Answer 6

ik ;]

Answer 7

lol i just got trolled!

Answer 8

BTW this is just the draft i haven't even revised it

Answer 9

lol mud..
You say you can't write? It's very good, but I read it like rap song! Make it a song haha XD

Answer 10

lol thanks

Answer 11

No prob ;)

Answer 12

Nice job Mud, do you accept suggestions?

Answer 13

ALWAYS!

Answer 14

anything to make it better would be appreciated!

Answer 15

Ok, well I'm juts gonna revise it and show you what I did ;)

Original:
The year is 2101, my name is Rex I’m a runner; I deliver packages to places and people. The packages are of all sizes, big, small, wide, and fat. We deliver everything for a price. Us runner’s don’t talk much about what we do, you could say we are not the most social type of people. Many don’t talk to us because they are either afraid of us or they don’t like what we do. It works like this; if you have a specific skill set then they find you they take you from whatever life you may have had at a young age and train you to run. We are given a set of rules to obey, “Never open the package, never be late, and don’t get involved.” I broke one of these rules. It all started with that one package… Edited:
The year is 2101. My name is Rex. I’m a runner. I deliver packages to places and people. The packages are of all sizes: big, small, wide, narrow, you name it I've delivered it. We runners deliver everything, but it'll cost you some of your paycheck... We don’t talk much about what we do though...I guess you could say we aren't the most social of people. Many don’t talk to us either. Mostly because they're afraid of us or they don’t like what we do. It works like this; if you have a specific skill set then they find you. They take you from whatever life you might have and at a young age you are trained to run. Just run. We are given a set of rules to obey, “Never open the package, never be late, and don’t get involved.” I broke one of those rules, but I have no regrets. It all started with that one special package…

Answer 16

WOW that looks awesome maybe you should write the story lol

Answer 17

Is it cool with you if I come back when im done with the book and if you could maybe go through it and tell me what needs to be done?

Answer 18

Sure, as long as it has no curse words or *scenes* I'd be happy to, how long do you tihnk it'd be?

Answer 19

lol I don't put that crap in my books! it's 30 pages on word lol but After I go through it i may knock some stuff out

Answer 20

Oh good, I like how you put it :D Great sounds good, let me know when you're ready

Answer 21

alright thanks bro for the help i appreciate it!

Answer 22

ehehe I'm a sis :P

Answer 23

Oh lol my bad sis

Answer 24

No probs found, you're good

Answer 25

lol thanks

Answer 26

Hey how's it going?