Need some help with and English 2 question, multiple choice! I will post it below...

Question

anonymous · Answer

Review the following passage and determine what should be done in its revision. 

Roller coasters by Mike Vacation 

The newest roller coasters is always the best. The fresh smell of a new coaster on the day of its opening. Hordes of excited people rushing to the park to experience the brand-new ride. They switch on there mobile devices as soon as they can to tell the world how much fun they just had. 

My favorite part is when I get on a big roller coaster. These are usually really tall, and they make people scream when the big drop comes. 

I wish there was more theme parks around the world so that I can ride a new ride all the time. In short, new rides are amazing! 

A. The student should work on having a main idea with logical transitions.
B. This student should work on developing a stronger argument against the topic.
C. This student should work on sentence structure and general clarity.
D. This student should work on grammar, spelling, and organization.

I believe the answer is C, what do you think? Is that right?

anonymous · Answer

i think its C. sentence structure and general clarity

anonymous · Answer

That's what I thought too, thanks :)

anonymous · Answer

np

anonymous · Answer

thank you for considering me worth for a medal :)

anonymous · Answer

np :) I have another question but i'm gonna post it separately...