Question

Could anyone please help me by proofreading a 2 page essay on a novel? Thanks =]

Answer 1

which novel

Answer 2

Go ahead and pot it here.

Answer 3

It's really good, but I suggest adding another paragraph; another example. Usually, essays are at least 5 paragraphs long (intro., conclusion, and three body paragraphs).

Answer 4

Thanks for the advice =D .. Our teacher has a 2 page limit though, so I can't exceed it.

Answer 5

I think you should try to condense some of it. Is there anything you can pull out that really is not necessary? Ask your teacher, but I think she'll prefer 5 paragraphs.

Answer 6

Hmm, I don't think so. The prof has never been specific with the paragraph formation. He's mostly big on an attention-grabbing title and first sentence that will "hook" the reader, a clear message/thesis that maps out exactly where the paper is going, examples/quotes from the novel that are interpreted to relate to the thesis, and a conclusion that synthesizes in detail what the paper is discussing. Do you think my paper is fine according to those standards?

Answer 7

Yes it is. You are a very good writer. :)

Answer 8

Thank you so much =D

Answer 9

You're welcome!

Answer 10

that is wonderful! Very well done! Very very great :D

Answer 11

Thanks Lara =]

Answer 12

Noo problem! I am happy to help!