Question

Hey everybody, I need some feedback on a song I've worked on and copyrighted. Can I get some critics? Thanks! <3

Answer 1

Did U ever hear of that wall in Germany?
Did U ever hear of it's fall?
Baby, that could easily b U and me
If we trust 1 another thru it all
And is that wall in Germany still existin'?
Or has it long since crumbled away
Honey U don't know what U've been missin'
If u knew how much U lost, How much more would U gain?
Thru and thru, whatever U do, I
I'm still here 4 u
Oh , oh yeah
Bein' in love it's only meant 4 2
In this case its me and U
When U say love it means 'I cherish U'
I'd die 4 u, and U would 2
Love don't mean nothin' less
Oh, oh yeah
Bein' in love is better than lonely pride
And it's sweeter than sad, sad nights
Waitin' on a good thing can close ur eyes
And life will pass u by, no surprise
But love will make u blessed

© Christal Morris 2012

Answer 2

i like it alot. love just the first three lines. reminds me of a cold play song =D

Answer 3

Thanks. Cold Play, huh? I was inspired by this 80's German metal band Scorpions... :)

Answer 4

what is critics?

Answer 5

People who give advice and/or criticism on people's work...

Answer 6

Your song is relly musical........................YOU ROCK!

Answer 7

Lol, thanks! :)

Answer 8

this song has words =D

Answer 9

lol you rock Jason.. you're sooo smart.. lol

Answer 10

yeah i know =D

Answer 11

Wow Tafkas! This is really an amazing song! I love it a lot!! Make sure you give me a free copy, when it comes out on CD!!! xD lol

Answer 12

Oh I WILL, Itz..... It's on piano. I'll be recording it sooner than I was going to if it gets more good feedback like that! <3

Answer 13

But I have some guitar, too. Gotta have guitar. :)

Answer 14

Aw thank you Tafkas! Wow piano and guitar!<3 I already love it :) Don't worry Tafkas, this song is already a hit and you have an amazing talent! ;)

Answer 15

harmonium

Answer 16

flute

Answer 17

Thanks, Itz. It's gonna be on a new album coming out sometime this fall, I hope. It's kind of...fun... lol

Answer 18

You're welcome, Tafkas. Good luck to ya! ;)

Answer 19

lol and have fun! <3

Answer 20

not just fun.............................................ITS BECOMES THE PASSION.............have a mind blowing performance :)

Answer 21

ROCK THE TEENS

Answer 22

Thanks guys. I'll remember you!! lol

Answer 23

lol thank you for highlighting us!<3

Answer 24

lol :)

Answer 25

lastly i would like to say














ROCK ONNNnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!

Answer 26

okay, man. Thanks. :)

Answer 27

nice... sounds good... feels good :)

"And it's sweeter than sad, sad nights"
above is ok... but im slightly.. not comfortable with the comparison...

still im no expert.. only giving u some criticism :P

Answer 28

lol, you're not comfortable with it? that's ok!!! thanks!!!

Answer 29

the lyrics are DEEP LOVE IT!

Answer 30

I like writing songs too!

Answer 31

Thanks evergirl. And you do? Can I hear a collabo? lol We're even MORE alike! <3

Answer 32

lol u wanna collaborate??

Answer 33

is that what u saying?

Answer 34

........ oh yeah!!!

Answer 35

awesome! way better than most of the crap that plays on the radio nowadays :D

Answer 36

Oh, my gosh.... *blush* Thank you, @thechocoluver445 .... :)

Answer 37

u have a gift!

Answer 38

no need to blush, it's great that you have a talent like this :)

Answer 39

Thanks, you guys. :)

Answer 40

I really like it, its good, but its not my style. I like harder stuff :) good job though.

Answer 41

@Bambi
Thanks, I totally get you. ;) I'm working on power ballads and stuff (like the song you read), so I'm kinda deviating from the harder rock that I do.

Answer 42

hardcore rock.............yeah! lol xD

Answer 43

Great song... but you should next time put a recording of it on Soundcloud. That would be pretty good
Or Youtube is great
:D

Answer 44

Thank you very much, julianassrange! :) I think I shall do that! :)