Question

Hey! I just wrote a speech about peaches, their origin, and a few other things. Please comment! I NEED FEEDBACK!! :D

Answer 1

where's the speech Lara =P

Answer 2

There! :D

Answer 3

I know I have to change a couple of errors, but that is just the first draft. :)

Answer 4

Very nice =] I love it! It sounds intelligent =P and it's interesting! I fixed a few awkward phrases and voila =D

Answer 5

Looks great! and I did the same with cottage cheese, this brings back memories for me as well:)

Answer 6

Thank you guys so much!! I really appreciate it! :) you are the best! :D

Answer 7

You're a great writer =D There wasn't much to it =] .. Glad to help!

Answer 8

Awwh, thanks Chels! Your a great friend! :D

Answer 9

Ditto <3

Answer 10

:D

Answer 11

Cute!