Hey! I just wrote a speech about peaches, their origin, and a few other things. Please comment! I NEED FEEDBACK!! :D

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anonymous · Answer

where's the speech Lara =P

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anonymous · Answer

There! :D

anonymous · Answer

I know I have to change a couple of errors, but that is just the first draft. :)

anonymous · Answer

Very nice =] I love it! It sounds intelligent =P and it's interesting! I fixed a few awkward phrases and voila =D

anonymous · Answer

Looks great! and I did the same with cottage cheese, this brings back memories for me as well:)

anonymous · Answer

Thank you guys so much!! I really appreciate it! :) you are the best! :D

anonymous · Answer

You're a great writer =D There wasn't much to it =] .. Glad to help!

anonymous · Answer

Awwh, thanks Chels! Your a great friend! :D

anonymous · Answer

Ditto <3

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:D

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Cute!