Question

EASY QUESTION - how do I make this sentence sound better?

In formation and upright, however in combat soldiers may be injured so this could change

Answer 1

Whats the sentence u r referring to?

Answer 2

I'm not sure of the context of this sentence, but I'll try.

In formation and upright, however, soldiers may be injured in combat, so this may change.

Answer 3

Soldiers may be injured in combat, so being in formation and upright, may (or could) be changed.

Answer 4

Just something I thought, whether it being right or not is something else.