Question

Is any one available for essay dialogue feedback?

Answer 1

Sure

Answer 2

You are a life saver. The assignment was to do and analysis essay on "Why Don't We Complain," by William F. Buckley Jr.

Answer 3

It has to be 3-4 pages long and in MLA format. I am down to the last paragraph and the conclusion and I am stuck!

Answer 4

Do you wanna share it? Maybe I can give you a few tips

Answer 5

Absolutlely, can I attach to a msg like this one. I am using Word 2010.

Answer 6

Sure

Answer 7

Okay, here it is.

Answer 8

A little history here, I turned in my rough draft on tuesday and the instructor marked it up and sent it back. I also have a copy of that if it helps you to understand what she is looking for.

Answer 9

The copy would be nice.

Answer 10

Okay, it is in PDF, is that okay?

Answer 11

Yes, that is

Answer 12

Instructors comments and corrections.

Answer 13

As you can see I have done a great deal of rewriting, I left the thesis alone until I was done with the body. I am just at a loss here on the paragraph beginning with the word Millions.

Answer 14

I'm sorry, I'll have to go now. When is it due to?

Answer 15

tonight by 11:55

Answer 16

Can you suggest anywhere else that I might try for help?

Answer 17

I have something scheduled now, wish I could help. Sorry!

Answer 18

No, I think here it's the best place to get help. Someone will eventually show up, don't worry.

Answer 19

is*

Answer 20

Thank You

Answer 21

Sorry I couldn't help, bye