Question

Need OPINIONS ON MY POEM:



It was pouring rain, but there I stood
Crying, Laughing, Sobbing, Chuckling
Yes, I was new in their neighborhood
I tried and tried but it didn’t work, at least I understood
They said it couldn’t be done but I was doing something

The chances they gave me wasn’t fair
They threw me right over the edge,
Expecting that I would know what to do in mid air
As I was falling they told me that was the fare,
But how was I to know that there was a pledge

Suddenly the wind began to stir.
It carried me further and further away
Now, as I fell, eve