Question

Can you tell me how I could write this sentence better?

In this paper I will show how Cheever’s central idea of not turning a blind eye to your troubles while life passes you by is shown by the author through Neddy’s usage of alcohol, the passage of time, locations, and social interactions to build the story and to help the reader better understand the character, background and actions of the story.

Answer 1

It is Fakshon...

Answer 2

Here is the problem. My professor wants me to include the Thesis, Central Idea, and the Elements of Setting in one sentence. "The thesis must include the central idea and the element of setting." - Professor's exact orders.

Answer 3

It has to be one sentence? :O

Answer 4

pretty much.

Answer 5

How about something like this? I omitted a few words.



I will explain how Cheever’s central idea of not turning a blind eye to your troubles is shown through Neddy’s use of alcohol, his social interactions, the passage of time, and locations, all of which help the reader better understand the character, his background, and his actions.

Answer 6

Great thanks.

Answer 7

:)

Answer 8

That's great! :)